這是另一首三數年前粵譯的合唱詩，也是同一原因，未有發表；有幾處當年做得未夠好的，現在都微調了。

《齊來讚美主聖名》

Words and Music by Ruth Elaine Schram – Lorenz Corporation
粵詞：海牛

參：http://www.jwpepper.com/sheet-music/media-player.jsp?&type=audio&productID=10058510

［］ = 和聲部

　齊來　讚美　我主～救恩
　現在　及永遠　也不～變更
　藉歡欣歌聲宣講基督國度光輝
　齊來　讚美　高舉　救主～聖名
　Jesus, Jesus, we praise Your Name,
　ever and ever and ever the same.
　Your majesty and glory we will gladly proclaim!
　Jesus, Jesus, Jesus, we praise Your Name.

＊齊來　　讚美　我主～救恩
　　［高歌　　歡欣　　　向主名頌讚］
　現在　及永遠　也不～變更
　　［恩主　　永遠　　　信實從沒變］
　藉歡欣歌聲宣講基督國度光輝
　　　　　［傳說祢國尊貴光輝］
　齊來　讚美　高舉　救主～聖名
［一起　讚美　高舉　主耶～～穌］
＊Jesus, Jesus, we praise Your Name,
　　［Jesus, Jesus, we praise Your Name,］
　ever and ever and ever the same.
　　［Jesus, Jesus, forever the same.］
　Your majesty and glory we will gladly proclaim!
　　　　　［Your glory we will gladly proclaim!］
　Jesus, Jesus, Jesus, we praise Your Name.
　　［Jesus, Jesus, Jesus, we praise Your Name.］

　縱眾山嶺一朝塌下
　傾覆於翻滾～海心
　祢作堅障並力保
［祢作堅固的保障］
　深知祢永看守
［深知主必看守］
　心中不擔憂
［心中不掛憂］
　Though the mountains crumble apart,
　tumble to the heart of the sea,
　You will be our strength and shield!
［You will be our strength and shield!］
　You will never leave us,
［You will never leave us,］
　never forsake us!
［never forsake us!］

repeat ＊

　高歌　歡欣　向主名頌讚
　恩主　永遠　信實從沒變
　傳說祢國尊貴光輝
［宣講基督國度光輝］
　齊來　讚美　高舉　救主～聖名
［一起　讚美　高舉　主耶～～穌］
　Jesus, Jesus, we praise Your Name.
　Jesus, Jesus, forever the same.
　Your glory we will gladly proclaim!
［Your glory we will gladly proclaim!］
　Jesus, Jesus, Jesus, we praise Your Name.
［Jesus, Jesus, Jesus, we praise Your Name.］

repeat ＊

　讚美　高舉　救主～聖名
［讚美　高舉　主耶～～穌］
　讚美　高舉
　救主～聖名
　讚祢名
［頌耶穌］
　Jesus, Jesus, we praise Your Name.
［Jesus, Jesus, we praise Your Name.］
　Jesus, Jesus,
　we praise Your Name,
　praise Your Name.
［praise Your Name.］

這是三數年前做的一首合唱詩粵譯，因當年的一些計劃，一直沒有發表過，現在貼出來，做個記錄。這些年來，只覺自己對翻譯以創造為題材的詩歌比較得心應手，也做得比較多，這首也是我做粵譯以來最滿意的作品之一。

《神的創造》

Words and Music by Anna Laura Page & Jean Anne Shafferman
  – Alfred Music Publishing
粵譯：海牛

參：http://www.jwpepper.com/sheet-music/media-player.jsp?&type=audio&productID=10010906

很久遠以先　漆黑遍地蔽天　教萬有主發悶
祂張眼四方　嘴巴有話要講　主創造正式開展
天鋪日月星　管晚上白晝　飛鳥唱歌和鳴動聽
滿海是大魚　花襯綠樹蔭　皆主創奇妙工
來歡唱　神開創　這新天地之喜
看一切　神所創　多麼好　多麼美
來歡唱　神開創　這新天地之喜
看一切　神所創　真太好　榮又美
Once upon a time the world was very dark;
  God felt very lonely.
He looked all around, His face bent in a frown;
  and then He started making:
the sun and the moon, the stars in the sky,
  all of the birds that fly up high,
the fish in the sea, the flowers and trees
  are all a part of God’s
creation, creation; God made a great new world.
Creation, creation, and it was very good!
Creation, creation; God made a great new world.
Creation, creation, and it was very good!

經過第五天　生機似盡已展　卻未慰主厭悶
祂張眼四方　嘴巴有話再講　這創造要有加添
獅在怒吼（ROAR!）　鴨在笑（QUACK!）　家裡小狗常吠叫（WOOF!）
尊尚目的　配男女　照著神樣式
來歡唱　神開創　這新天地之喜
看一切　神所創　多麼好　多麼美
來歡唱　神開創　這新天地之喜
看一切　神所創　真太好　榮又美
原來係這麼美！
By day number five the world had come alive;
  still God felt so lonely.
He loked all around, His face bent in a frown,
  and then He started making:
Lions that roar!(ROAR!) Ducks that quack!(QUACK!)
  Dogs that bark behind your back!(WOOF!)
Woman and man! What a plan!
  All are parts of God’s
creation, creation; God made a great new world.
Creation, creation, and it was very good!
Creation, creation; God made a great new world.
Creation, creation, and it was very good,
and it was very good!

翻譯國語詩歌往往比翻譯英文詩歌更難，海牛的同事菲臘擅長為它們重寫新的粵詞，產量倒不少，月前見他在臉書群組上貼出這首，我一時興起，便試著另做一個粵譯的版本。

《詩篇二十三篇》
曲、詞：王愷君、林婉容
粵譯：海牛

參：http://youtu.be/710eyuDF01w

上帝我得祢作牧者
已一點都不缺
領我安趟於青青的草場
停歇於溪水邊

令我心甦醒轉路向
導我奔走公義徑
就算經幽深死蔭絕谷
亦未怕遇害
全賴祢伴著我走

還在我大敵對面
擺祝捷的宴席
為我膏（動詞讀「告」）油提拔我
流澤滿溢我杯
定有恩福愛護
一世跟我伴
願我永住在祢聖殿裡邊
千百萬世（百千億世）

上帝─我的親愛牧者

後天聖誕日崇拜中，禮頓道公理堂日堂詩班將連同 JoyfulKids 小朋友們獻唱 Greg Gilpin 編撰的 On This Day Angels Sing，歌詞由鄙人粵譯。在此預祝各位聖誕快樂！

《這天天使歌》

Words from Piae Cantiones
(Adapted by Greg Gilpin)
Music by Greg Gilpin
粵譯：海牛

參考：http://youtu.be/VnfFdH9-OTg

願這天這讚歌
遍地和小孩唱
賀聖嬰君王誕
降世為來救贖
愛及和平賜下
On this day earth shall ring
With the song children sing
To the child, tiny King,
Born on earth to save us,
Peace and love He gave us.

耀景星天際顯
引博士三賢至
跪我主小床邊
獻奉珍貴禮物
讚頌與敬拜祂
Wondrous star o’er His head,
Wise Men three to Him led.
Kneel they low by His bed,
lay their gifts before Him.
Praise Him and adore Him.

(Gloria in Excelsis Deo…)

在這天天使歌
遍地和歡然唱
賀聖嬰君王誕
降世為來救贖
賜下愛與平安
On this day angels sing.
With their songs earth shall ring
Sounds of joy to the King!
Born on earth to save us,
Peace and love He gave us

(Gloria in Excelsis Deo…)

在這天天使歌　
On this day angels sing.